Aesthetics yes, faceup

The lips look nice and the eye brows are nice and shapely. The only thing would be the eyes. The lines aren't very smooth so it appears as if your hand was shaking? I would just be careful of that and do small sections at a time. Sometimes I draw a straighter line if I hold my breath. It sounds silly, but it works, at least for me. The eye shadow is good, but I would blend it out more around the edges. But if you like the dramatic edges then maybe bring the eye shadow closer to the eye? Definitely keep practicing cause you are off to a great start.

 

I love this faceup! The eyes are so out there! Great job

 

Nice job. The Egyptian feel of the eyes is quite nice especially with the black and blue blend/contrast. The eyebrows came out well, the lines are generally uniform and they arc nicely. Just take a bit more care when touching up the eye lines however. Overall its great, it really pops!