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Aesthetics [WIP] 3rd face up - DIM Larina

Jul 17, 2015

    1. I got started on my 3rd face-up a while ago. Wanted to see if I had improved but wasn't sure if I was allowed to dig the old thread out of the graveyard and post on that (because that was last posted on around last year I think.)

      I am going for a lighter, more natural face-up than the one before. All it still needs is some eyelashes and gloss... Maybe some darkening of the lip area and generally extra detail if needed (though I'm not sure if I'm skilled enough yet for the extra detail that I'd want :p .)

      Former thread for my second face-up (so you can compare) :
      http://www.denofangels.com/forums/showthread.php/632988-Face-up-critique-2nd-face-up-ever-DIM-Larina

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    2. There is definite improvement from your second one! I really like how you did the lips, the color looks great and I love the two-tones in it. For the creases above the eye, I'd use a lighter color to make it not as jarring, and bring down the eyebrows a little bit. They seem a little bit high on her head up into her forehead.

      Great job on your third!~
       
    3. She looks fresh! Good job!
       
    4. I agree about the eyebrows. With her sleepy eyes (which I LOVE) the eyebrows should be a little less surprised looking.