Aesthetics some of my recent works, critiques??

I cant fault anything!!! Omg the lips are just sublime I wish I could do mine like that! Ive got an incoming doll that needs those lips!

 

The only critical thing I could come up with, faded from first to last, and that was the lower eyelashes. You do beautiful work. I don't own girl dolls but those are exquisite faceups.

 

i love a lot of the face ups you've done but i do have a few pointers. when the eyebrows get farther from the corners of the face they fade a bit which is fine but they seem to fade away half way through where the eyebrow should be, you may just like short eyebrows so thats just my opinion. Another idea, and this is just personal preference, the bottom lip comes in very sharply in the middle so try giving it a bit less of a point. Otherwise i love the texture on the lips and the beautiful work on the eyes!

 

Absolutely beautiful work, the lips are amazing.

 

i would say your work is brilliant, its beautifully done. my only tiny little (and it is really minor tiny thing) is you use alot of green in the eye brows and around the lashes also between the eyebrows and eye, it just seems to make them look a little wrong to me. the work you do is great, fantastic quality and great detailing but i would like to see not so much green / yellow! i dont know if its the photos making it look green/ yellow? it might just be me but if you could use a different tone - more natural colour tone instead of the green/ yellow - i think and feel that would then make your work that extra bit more stunning and fantastic and then you would be perfect!

as for tutorials have alook here on doa there are some great ones to help also try a search on you tube there are some great face up tutorial videos on there

 

These are gorgeous, stunning! The only thing I can fault is the lower area under the eyes, it looks very yellow and almost bruise like in places. But honestly these are beautiful.

 

Wow, amazing face up! I really like it!

 

Firstly, you have a polished technique that looks professional and competent. That is a great achievement.

Agreeing with some of the others about the vivid yellows and greens around the eyes. I would tone that in with the rest of the faceup palette. If you are looking for a vintage style, a burnt sienna (pink and orange-brown based) might do it. There is a handy thread here somewhere on natural faceup palettes, but damned if I can find it. If I remember where it is, I will post it in here. But your palette is generally spot on and needs no help. It is just the cool yellows and greens that stand out.

My other recommendation is to vary your style. A faceup is what we use to convey the doll's character. It can change a sculpt radically, making it look soft and sweet or dark and moody. These faceups are very similar and, whilst you are obviously proficient in that style, it would be interesting to see you take the plunge and try something different. Try varying the colours or the shading shapes you use around the eyes. Have a look at some of the awesome faceups around here and have see what they add to the doll's face.

Anyway, you already produce high level work and it is great to see you seeking and really listening to suggestions on here. It means you will develop your work even further. Good luck!

 

Beautiful work, the attention to detail really stands out. I particularly love the little flowers to the side of the eye and cheek - so unusual. If I was approaching you for a face-up my only request would not to have the darker lines inside the lip corners as it always looks a bit like Vampire blood to me. I know this effect is very in vogue and most people love it but it is not for me. You are clearly very talented as your face-ups are exquisite!

 

Hi lady, very beautiful work, those lips are like gloss on a candy apple! Very nice!! I also love the choice of eyes