Aesthetics Ringdoll Sol faceup - please give some critique

I don't know anything about painting scars myself, so I hope someone else can offer advice! I think they look a bit too bright pink, but from what I can see the shading on the cheek scar looks like it has good dimension.
I think his eyes look very good. I have one suggestion about the eyebrows: the grey colour is quite uniform and might look more realistic if they were a bit more "salt and pepper", with some darker strokes and some lighter strokes - kind of like the wig. Here are a couple of pictures of what I mean:

or look up ex. George Clooney, Ben Stiller etc. Hope this is helpful

 

A very good face-up so far! I especially like the eye blushing and eyelashes, they are so neat and tiny I just have two comments to make:

- The scars look really good, nice and fresh! To make older scars you can use acrylic thickener or acryl paint, you can make a raised scar with it.
- The eyebrows are a little too high and a little too light compared to the hair. Some blushing would help, you can add them to this layer and spray it again.

Overall a very good face-up, are you sure it's only your seccond attempt?

 

That's a meticulous face up, Etheldreda offers great suggestions...out of curiosity are you looking to make his scars permanen, is this his character? Some scars also have needle point marks in the flesh from when they were stitched..I'm not sure how to copy links here, or if permissible, I saw great tutorials on you tube, very inspiring..they used liquid latex, and eyeshadows..
Are you going to scar his chest and back up too?

 

Hi, I like the scars they look fresh or just healed. I agree that his eyebrows are too high and need more than one color so it will blend with different colored wigs. All that said I think you did a wonderful job.

 

As the eyebrows have been addressed already, I'm not saying anything about them (exept that tips you got for them are good). So, eyelashes is what I'd like to point out: you could think if you'd like to make them sparcer/darker next time, as now they kind of blend in the blush below the eye. Not a bad look, per se, but as you look at photos of real people, you can see, that lower eyelashes are often much sparcer than upper.

But yeah. Good work on whole, and you really seem to have good skills to handle your pencils and brushes - lines are even and controlled.

 

I actually have a facial scar (I had shingles a couple years back) and I know a good bit about scars in general. Scars that are newly forming ten to be reddish. On lighter skinned people (like me) older scars tend to be the same color as the surrounding skin, or very close to it. On darker skinned folks (like your doll) they tend to be a little bit darker than the surrounding skin. So the scars on your doll looks like he got them within the past couple months.

 

I think the eyes look great, particularly the lower lashes. As suggested before me the eyebrows look a bit too grey, but nothing too dramatic.
I would maybe change the angle a tiny bit to make them more realistic, but that's just me.
I think for a second face up it's amazing!