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Head critic

Sep 24, 2009

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    1. This is going to be a guy, but that's not relevant right now.

      I haven't sanded him yet, in case i need to improve on something, which I know I need.

      This is his face, and I need your opinions >.< what should I do to improve him?

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      #1 teghoune, Sep 24, 2009
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    2. try to make it more symmetrical
      + resize your pictures or crop them ... TT__TT saka hindi mo naman kaylangang ilapit sobra yung camera para mapicturan yung sobrang liit na bagay... blurred tuloy.
       
      #2 joankagami, Sep 24, 2009
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    3. Yeah... Symmetry really is the problem huh? TT.TT

      oh yeah, sorry bout the blurry pic. ganyan talaga pag pasmado:XD. also I used my phone cam, hence crap quality. But, i'll keep that in mind >< lolz
       
      #3 teghoune, Sep 24, 2009
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    4. see... mas ok kung small pic
       
      #4 joankagami, Sep 25, 2009
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    5. I like that you've put some personality in his facial structure, especially around his eyes. I almost have a feel for the character. but I agree that making his face more symmetrical would be great. I can't put my finger on it, but something in his upper lip seems amiss. still, this face looks good :)
       
      #5 ouimissymarie, Sep 27, 2009
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    6. I think he's great.... can you post more pics? from this angle it sort of looks like he needs more forehead and back of head, but can't tell without more pics. I really like the way his nose looks in this pic!
       
      #6 patl, Oct 5, 2009
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    7. It looks good so far, it has some character in it.
      Apart from making the face more simmetric, i suggest maybe moving the eyes closer, and giving the upper lip a more defined shape. I'd say also work on the jaw and chin a little, but it'd be easier to give a more exact critique with more photos of the head in various views (low, side, etc) :)
       
      #7 Deng_EnWei, Oct 22, 2009
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