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General Critique Request

Dec 16, 2019

    1. Hi all,

      I just finished the first draft of my new doll, Amara. I have some ideas of what I want to change (namely the shape of the bottom of the feet and the way a few of the joints fit together), but I was wondering if anyone had any feedback on her in general? I went for a burly look, but that meant I had to stretch out and reshape the joints a bit to get them to work much (otherwise she collides with herself.)

      Basically, going into Draft 2, does anyone have any advice on what might work well for her?

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    2. She's a totally cool sculpt with such a cute face! I like the overall proportions and her chubbiness.
      As for critique, depending on how much posability you want for her - have you checked her joints? Do you want her hip joint to go under her belly when she's leaning forward? It looks like she's wearing a shirt.

      One little thing: Of course, I am not an expert for fantasy races, but I'd still expect the belly button to be higher up. ;)
       
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    3. Thank you for the tips! Something about the hip joint was bothering me but I couldn’t figure it out - I’ll adjust that, and the belly button too. :)