Aesthetics First MDD faceup + Mod :D

I think she looks great!
Only suggestion I have is maybe smooth out the colour in the cheeks a bit more but she does have the Anime look that we all love so much

 

She looks really good! That's an amazing first face up! I think you're going to create many great things in the future.

 

This might just be a personal preference, but I would put black to the inside line of the eyes, so that there isn't a gap between the eyeliner and the sclera. And also use a slightly darker pencil for the mouth so that it stands out a bit more.

But I love how you have used some yellow underneath the black eyeliner, makes it look more smooth! I have to try that trick myself if I ever paint an anime head like this.

 

She looks great! The colors you used compliment her eyes really well, and I love how you drew her eyeshape. I think the mouth placement is a smidge low, though! And it looks slightly off center.

 

I'd put white or a pink in between her eye sockets and her eyeliner (Like, her waterline) but still she's beautiful. I like her cheeks.

 

She's adorableee!!!!

 

So cute!