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Aesthetics First faceup :) (Volks YoSD Bontenmaru)

May 31, 2017

    1. edit: there are a couple updated pictures a few posts down. :XD:

      Heya guys. Bontenmaru is my first BJD. I got him secondhand-- the original owner wiped his default faceup, so it gave me an opportunity (responsibility?!) to do one myself. It finally stopped raining for one day so I sat in the garage for about six hours yesterday working on this little guy's face. Slept on it and looked at it again this morning and touched a few things up and added his eyelashes. :)
      No hair in this since his bangs cover his eyebrows:

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      And here's a before/after of him from when I got him a couple weeks ago vs today:

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      I wanted it to look somewhat like his default (what with the short, higher-up eyebrows and all that) but with my own art style in it. I've painted statues, but I've never done something quite like this (with pastels and all that) so it was a biiiig learning experience and I had a lot of fun with it. :) I have some plans to someday dress him like my own Bontenmaru character that I've got, so the little flecks of not-quite-white hairs in his eyebrows will match that too whenever I get around to it. ;o

      (Also, times like these I really wish I had a better camera. :( My phone makes things so grainy it feels like.)​
       
      #1 Arvis, May 31, 2017
      Last edited: Jun 1, 2017
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    2. He looks really good! I love the shape and color of the eyebrows, and the silver in the eyeshadow is a really nice touch. My only little critique is that the lips look a little thick, like they aren't faded into the rest of the skintone quite enough, but that's really just a style choice more than anything, especially if you were inspired by a Volks faceup. This is great for a first faceup, I can't wait to see what else you do! :3nodding:
       
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    3. Holy Crikey! Beautiful job! :D
       
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    4. @Geekmama -- Thank you very much!! ;-;

      @KiyoshiSenshi Thank you!! I do prefer the look of a more 'natural' fuller lip, though I can also see why others might not as much... I will see if I can find a happy medium with it. Though I will say Bontenmaru does have a pretty big pouty lower lip. x'D That probably emphasizes the shading more. Hm... I did a little bit more poking at his faceup today around his lips and chin. I blended the lips a little bit more. I don't think I want to go any farther than this-- but how is this looking to you?

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      (...And now I have a feeling like I want to blush his hands. But I play with his hands and hold them so much that the blushing would probably just get ruined pretty quickly. xD Oh well.)
       
    5. It looks really great! It also looks like you softened up the black lip corners, which really helps soften the lips and make them look a little more natural. He looks amazing! And be sure to share the hands too if you blush them, I'd love the see the full effect. :3nodding:
       
    6. I think one thing that might be playing tricks with his lips, is that the lip lines are a little big (both the dark corners and the lighter ones along the whole lip), in addition to the colors being a bit different from the base color. Even if they are pretty close in color, the size is what catches your eye first. :)

      But I agree about the eyeliner! :D It looks very even, smooth, and very sleek and cool!
       
    7. I honestly love it! Especially the lines around his eyes. I recently did my first face up and I didn't dare to add extra lines around the eyes because I was scared I'd make them asymmetrical. Not sure if it's okay for a novice like me to have critique anyway since I'm not able to do it better but.. Thought I'd share my thoughts anyway. I feel like the brown shading right next to the black of the eyes looks a bit muddy. It's slightly uneven in color, I mean. But meh, details. I love it <3
       
    8. Blush his hands! You can always do them again, and you will get such joy out of it!