First face up, concrit please!

I like the lips and eyes but the brows looks slightly uneven, left looks a bit thinner than right :3 Maybe use a finer brush to paint the brow and lower lashes

 

Shading in the ears looks a lil too dark. Possibly the same with nostrils but its not so bad :3 The values are really nice otherwise

 

Wooooow she's gorgeous! Just like everyone else before me, I also prefer lighter brows. I used sharpened pencils. I don't have the fine motor skills to paint brows yet. :p

 

Your nostrils are defintely a bit harsh, maybe try using pastel layering to get more of a gradual shadow?
Also, I feel like the eyeliner is trying to fight against the eye shape instead of working with it. I do a lot of makeup on people, and when doing wings on lids that aren’t straight across, you need to do less of an angle or “swoop” and connect the tip of the wing deeper into the eye so its “thicker”. Try looking up makeup tutorials on eyeliner, it should help you get a feel for liner on different eye shapes!

Overall though, I’d say well done for a first go!

 

My advice- the first line you should draw for the eyeliner should be the “flick” of the wing. You want to bring it out a bit more than up, so that it goes beyond the edge of the eye, and the tip shouldn’t go too much higher than the highest point of the upper lid, if you’re going for a more dramatic look. Small wings are done the same way. Then start in the middle of the top lid when pulling your liner to the wing. Doll eyes are much smaller, but on people you try to make a little triangle between the two lines that you then fill in, so it doesn’t look like a line that bends. After filling in the wing, if desired, you can pull a thin line from the inner eye to the middle and smooth the “seam”. However, on downturned eyes, connecting to the inner corner can give it a bit of a harsher look as generally the wing is to produce an illusion of the eye being more upturned or straight across than it is. Lower lid liner should be done last and sparingly, as going along the waterline all the way to the inner corner can give it a very 2005 look if you know what I mean, which is great if thats what youre going for, but to me it doesn’t look like that’s the case
Best of luck!

 

No problem and good luck with your new brush :3 I need to get a new one myself as I'm struggling to create ultra fine lines that tapers out at the tip.

 

Looks really good! Maybe just keep the pencil a tad bit sharper next time ^^

 

I like the coloring in the lips, I think it looks really good. I would back up what's been said about the brows, maybe finer strokes, unless stylistically you want them thick or less realistic, in which case perhaps try making them more uniform.
Inner ear seems a bit dark, as well. It also looks like there's a smudge on the upper part of the ear... is it a purposeful mark?
Good luck on your continued efforts, overall not bad at all.

 

If your having trouble with getting thin lines with the eyebrow there's an awesome YouTube video here/threads/drawing-faceup-eyelashes-lip-lines-etc.760200/I hope this helps you. She looks great!

 

This is great for a first faceup! As for critques, I'd say try and work on making the eyebrows more even, and adding more skin texturing to the head. Maybe try and get some different shades of brown in the eyebrows aswell. All in all though, it's a great first faceup!