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Critique my head!

May 29, 2012

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    1. #1 IamSeraPlz, May 29, 2012
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    2. Hey i Hope i can help you a bit :) first i like the profile of her :) but there are a few things to improve first i think her eyes are a little bit to "wide" and very round (sorry for my english o-o) she would look really shocked with eyes .
      may you try to give her more eyelid :)

      and a second help for the eyes is the space between the eyes should be at little bit more the size of an eye

      and for the ears I think ars are one of the hardest part in sculptin so you may take some pictures to guide you and try to sculpt one part after another. for example:
      http://www.infovisual.info/03/048_en.html

      I always start with the helix and earlobe then let it dry.
      then i make the Tragus and then the inner part of the ear :) hope i helped a bit
       
      #2 nu123, Jun 24, 2012
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    3. The face shape and placement of the features is very good. I especially like her profile. The eyes are very round, so maybe she could use more eyelid top and bottom. The mouth looks a little "stuck on" the front of the face, instead of something that's part of the underlying structure, if you see what I mean. Maybe you could take the lips off, shape the mouth structure, then put them back on?

      I agree with what nu123 says about the easiest way to make ears. :) They should extend from about eyebrow level to about the bottom of the nose.

      It's a great start. I'd like to see more!
       
      #3 Alewife, Jun 24, 2012
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    4. Hahaha. I'd just about given up on getting anyone to critique my head! I'm much further along now!

      The ears advice is really useful- I ended up scrapping her current ears and giving her new ones, but I still view ears as something to improve upon in my future attempts.

      I totally reworked the mouth too, and changed some of the eye shape (though I honestly kinda like the surprised look she has, so I haven't changed too much).

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      Hana: the effort continues by mahoubunnybell, on Flickr

      Recent pic, but not MOST recent... I'm aiming to take those today. As you can see, I'm working on priming her, and constructing a body.
       
      #4 IamSeraPlz, Jun 25, 2012
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    5. I guess it has been a while since you posted. :) Looking forward to seeing your progress. The body looks great!
       
      #5 Alewife, Jun 25, 2012
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