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critique my first head using eyes to sculpt around.

Jan 22, 2015

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      here are more pictures off my phone. I hope every one can see them. Yes my clay is really dirty! There are things I see wrong with it but I'd love to hear every one's opinions. Advice one what to change or what you like is great!
       

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    2. Hi there :)
      Can you post profile pics of this head? Personally I think, that eyebrows are a bit too high, and I believe, you rushed to sculpt nose and mouth and forgot to add everything that should be underneath, so the face looks a bit plane. Also it's a bit too wide in the eyes area. But I must tell you it's pretty symmetrical. I always have problems positioning nose and mouth in the center of the face. You have a good eye for symmetry and it will help you a lot :)
       
    3. I didn't even notice about the eye brows thanks for pointing that out. Yeah I did kind of rush the nose. Don't worry its a work in progress so I really do appreciate the critique.