Aesthetics Body Blushing

Well it depends on the look yore going for, but I suggest toning down the intensity on the breasts and butt as they tend to stand out compared to the other areas. her breasts are really red compared to the more purple pink on the butt. But your collarbones look really nice in my opinion! In the last pic they don't seem very harshly blushed against the skin, and are a middle color (orangish) which matches the resin tone well. So I think you should aim for that! you're also really good at spotting the areas where there should be blushing, but I advise using a consistent color, and less intensity in some areas ^^ well done first attempt

 

Not bad! I agree with the other comment or about the color being too much on the breasts. Of course all bodies are different, but I think an intense shading would be limited to the areola area (which may in itself vary in size from person to person, but generally is a smaller area around the nipple).
maybe find a nice picture and try to emulate it

 

Her boobs are pretty realistic, but the colours should be much less intense, especially on the nipple. I think as a whole you should lean more towards red orange and brown with your colours, and especially change the pink you used on the navel.

 

The collar bones are very nice, her breasts kind of look swollen/infected though, I agree with the others to tone it down a lil bit. I like how you did the spine line and the uh butt line (lol?) too.

 

If you were going for realism, you got caught up on your colors. The pinks you've chosen all seem to have a cool, purplish lean to them, and are very saturated. Use something softer and with more of a peach lean, and I think you'll find you get better results. The veining on the breasts looks well done, but in combination with such a bright pink, it winds up making her breasts look very irritated. Still, you've got the right idea.