Andrei <3 Feedback/Critique please~ *Nudity D:*

Here we go, my Russo-Korean, Andrei. Of course he is still a work in progress. I have been working on him for maybe two months? It will take so much more time to finish him

I would believe that I have so far done pretty well considering my total lack of training ^^;

He's a maaaaaaajor work in progress @@. I also apologize for the poor quality in these pictures, the camera has no autofocus. It's hard to figure it out!


Aah, there he is before I ruined him with my faceup "skills" >_>;;


Trying to pose a doll that has no stringing (thus far) is harder than you would htink. >:\


And that is what he looks like now, under the desklamp because the overhead light is completely broken ;3; Sorry, its bright as I could get him. That left leg is a temporary one just to make sure I had enough clay to make it.

So yeah, besides major sanding and revamping of his joints >_> Do his arms look too long to you as well? I mean, all of these pictures of him (save the last), he's unstrung so he's a little lankier than he would be when strung...But still. I think his upper arm is way too long. He also has a bad case of the Angelina Jollie and his left eye is too small. And his forehead looks ...Dumbtarded, I noticed that when I put him in front of the mirror.

But all in all, what do you think of him so far? Any critique you have in mind would be very much appreciated .
Thankyouuu~!

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I shortened his too-long forearms, and I revamped his head. He has a forehead now~! And his eyes are even. Only I don't know where he is at the moment so no pictures. D'aww.

 

I rove you too. D:

 

Thanks~. His right arm still needs hacking away at, and I think I might just scrap them entirely and make a new set with better jointing in the elbows. But seeing I have to ration my clay I'mma first figure out whether or not I can afford to >>;

I found him so progress pictures sooner or later ^^; I can't get a hold of any S Hooks so I'm not bothering to make the head cap yet, or finalize his hands/feet.

 

Wow I forgot that I put andrei up here. >:\

And thank you guys ~!

Switchblade - Thanks x3. His body has gone through some neglect since I've been trying to perfect his face but yeah, thank you very much for pointing out the hip/waist stuff for me, I wouldn't've noticed that at like. All. o_o;

Ok, the lighting is balls, but JESUS AND MARY this photo was actually ...FOCUSED (This camera has no autofocus and that gives me the sad).



He looks all. Different, now ):

See, at that point, I was giving up on making his eyes even annnnd so I just closed one XD. But after a little while I discovered the disturbingness it is to have a constantly winking doll so I opened the eye again but, I dont have a decent picture of that yet since I'm not really...Done, getting him even. And you know what I notice in that picture his lips are a little thin. And one cheek is more full than the other. And his right eye probably needs to open up a little more.

As for his hands, yeah. I'mma make them bigger, since I have to remake them anyway xD The hooks didnt work at all >________>

Nakitama -
Thankyou so much~! I surprised myself actually since I've never sculpted before. Well except for in like, school art class where wed make like, li'l clay boxes and vases for mother's day and other assorted holidays xD.

Well as for his size, he was /suppoooosssed/ to be 44 CM tall. I however, don't draw out a plan, I'm just like LOL SCULPT so he came out like ... That.

Because I have yet to finalize his body (Im completely remaking his limbs, his torso stays but arms? BYE! His legs too.) I dont know how he's going to be exactly. But he's targeted toward MSD Size, a little bigger though.


Here we go, Alexei (AR Cien) holding Andrei's head in his lap. Excuse the suck. It's a horrible comparison picture, since, well, it wasn't meant to be one XD I'll get a new one D:

Oh yeah by the way that picture was taken yesterday so you can after all see I opened his eye up. D: But it still needs fixing >:\


Head mobility - He can move his head aboutthe same range of motion as a person can. And of course because hes a doll he can do a 360. but yeah, his head tilts back pertay far. But of course, when I string him tight he might not still do that.

 

Yay, no more neglect for Andru, I took his head out now that school's over and i Hvae time to work on him.

Here's an er, interesting comparison picture? x3 I took my AR Cien apart and stuck random parts together.

He looks quite burn victimish.

But that was a while ago, before I fixed up his face (His eyes still needevening, GAH they are so hard to get even~!) He needs both his ears, and a bit of resculpting in his mouth. And carving under his jaw, cause it's too fatty looking.





* Edit yay D:* Worked on his lips. They're still a bit crooked though.


So yeah. I'd really like some feedback. D:

 

Thanks My friend says he looks like "The Littlest Chinese Boy" with that wig on. X3 Yeah, i'm going to even his cheeks but i'm leaving eye-...Superevening, for later, because since one socket is sculpted thicker than the other (I have to hack it out with a knife later on >:\) its hard to figure out where it's even. But I'm doing my best @3@

I took out some of his cheekness. I was afraid to do too much and have him end up all wonky looking <_<;

 

xD dork. I love you D: 33