Aesthetics 2nd FACEUP

You have artistic talent, that is evident. You mastered the basic, safe, default vanilla style face-up the first time around which is quite impressive. The symmetry of your eyebrows could use some work on the first face-up from what I can see from your photos and I like that you did not over work it. But, if you really want a thorough critique you need to take some sharp, clear, straight on photos without a wig, like your first shot only straight on so your symmetry and brush strokes can be evaluated.

I would need to see more close-ups of the second face-up to really be able to give you a legitimate critique. The tatoo looks quite good.
I see a few rough areas like in the arrows facing inward looking a little rough, but the overall design and execution is good. The bottom of the skull bothers me. The line looks irregular and too flat. Based on what I can see of the eyebrows, they look a tad overworked and could use a few brush strokes of a lighter color to make them more natural. But, it is really hard to critique the face with that shot that is far away with the artificial lighting, and the long wig.