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2nd face up!

Jun 20, 2013

    1. [​IMG][​IMG]one thing i noticed is that the right side of her lip isnt even with the left aha;; but! this attempt is much better than my first one. any constructive criticism would be appreciated!! thank you for looking ;v;
       
    2. I like it, you painted well eyes and also lips, blushing on cheeks is subtle and delicate which i love it.
      I guess that it's nicely done as you've used acrylic paints which i never tried :XD: you're braver than me.
      Try to add a little more color in tear duct it will add more depht to the eyes :)
       
    3. I like her beauty marks
       
    4. huge cutie!!
       
    5. I love her beauty marks very nice indeed!!! The lip can always be fixed. I also love how you do you brush strokes on the lips and eyebrows. The eyebrows are very realistic!!
       
    6. I love the eyebrows and birthmarks! Very cute.
       
    7. So cute! I love the dark lip color. Really stands out.
       
    8. Ahhh thank you everyone!! /)w(\
       
    9. I think it's great for a second try! Well done :D!

      Things to watch out for:

      1) Your eyebrows are lovely and even, but they could be a little more 'solid' in colour, and a little longer. Try alternating layers of pastel with lines!
      2) You pointed it out, but her lip is a little uneven! I like the colour a lot - it's just a thing to watch out for next time <3
      3) Practice makes perfect on delicate eyelashes - remember your lower lashes are always a lot finer than your upper ones, and thick bottom lashes can look a bit odd without ones in on top to 'back them up'

      I think it's very well done, and with time I'm sure you'll get better and better!
       
    10. Ill try that with the eyebrows next time!!! and youre right aha;; i still havent put in the actuall eyelashes in so maybe it wont be as noticeable haha. thank you so much!!
       
    11. I'd encourage more use of pastels to blush, fill in the eyebrows a bit, and/or take place of acrylic on the lips for a more realistic look. I like the beauty marks, and the eyebrows are very even! :)
       
    12. For a 2nd face up that is a great job... I like it and the eyebrows I had to look closely I thought you had stuck real hair on.. lol... but great job.... :)
       
    13. I think you have a really good artistic eye. Her beauty marks, eyebrows, blush, everything is spot on and I love her expression. I would just say the lines are a bit shakey. You just need to keep on practicing to achieve delicate lines. That takes a very steady, light hand, and you are well on your way there. :)