1st faceup! Critique please

I thinks she's wonderful for your first. I honestly wouldn't do anything to the gloss. It seems just right to me.

 

Wow, you did a stunning job for your first faceup! I can tell that you are going to do well with this hobby

 

I love the look and the colors! You must be into art because this is good for a first faceup!
I have two humble suggestions:
1.)The freckles look stylized. If that was what you were going for, then great! It's cute! But if you were going for a more natural look, I would suggest using watercolor and flicking it onto the face(there's a nice tutorial on YouTube) instead of doing each dot by hand because humans tend to make freckles too orderly/ into a pattern which goes against the realistic randomness of freckles.
2.) The lips look a bit chapped because the lines are either too dark or not thin enough.
Those eyebrows are impressive in both placement and symmetry. Great job!

 

Both face ups are stunning! I really like how you have done the blushing its like and natural.

 

I think you did a really good job! It looks like a billion times better than my first faceup.

 

hi there! it's a pretty good job for your first try, the eyeliner is especially well done.
a couple suggestions to add onto others:

-the bottom of the face along the chin/jawline has some spots that appear dirty? i have had this happen to me before, its usually dirt or pastel accidentally sealed in. not very visible, just something i noticed.
-it seems to lack the depth of the first faceup, more of a natural skintone color in the eyelids and on the bottom of the eye might help with that.