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Contest 13-line Poetry Contest [winner announced]

Aug 25, 2017

    1. The winner of the poetry contest is Phanuel:

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      Your challenge is to make a poem that has exactly thirteen lines.

      This year our prize for this contest is a Conarium Candlestick Virgo!

      This image will serve as the inspiration for your poem:

      2017prize-conarium.jpg

      Rules
      1. Your poem must be 13 lines long.
      2. Your poem must be inspired by Conarium Candlestick Virgo.
      3. You may submit one poem only.
      4. Once your poem is up, do not make any edits to your entry (even for typos!)
      Your poem does not need to rhyme.

      All entries must meet the general anniversary contest rules and eligibility requirements.

      How to Enter
      Post your poem in this thread.
      Only post poems – chat, questions or comments will be removed.

      Our winner will be selected by the Den of Angels staff. DoA staff may enter for fun but may not win the prize.

      Important Dates

      Deadline for entries: August 30th, 11:59pm EDT

      If you have any questions about the contest, post in Ask the Moderators.
       
      #1 DoA Mod Squad, Aug 25, 2017
      Last edited by a moderator: Sep 10, 2017
      • x 6
    2. Wings aflutter
      A quiet stutter
      An exhale of breath
      The stinging sharp tang of death

      A candle’s flicker
      Moths’ wings quicker
      than the blink of an eye
      and the death bell‘s cry

      Hush hush don’t speak aloud
      Blow out the flame
      Don’t be to blame
      if you close your eyes
      to the doomed one’s cries
       
      • x 3
    3. What can I see that two eyes cannot?
      I can see colors the rainbow forgot,
      Colors that whisper, mumble or yell,
      With names that are secret, names I can't tell,
      As many names as Eskimo snow--
      Hues, tints and shades between and below
      The colors that show.

      Where can I fly with impractical wings,
      Wings that can't take me to places or things,
      To landscape or seascape, to city or farm,
      To scenes that are frozen or worlds that are warm?
      These wings of my mind go beyond earthly skies,
      Flapping to Hades or Paradise.
       
      • x 8
    4. Centuries spent sat out to light the way for those who need,
      and nothing but wafting smoke for those deemed unworthy,
      long days left alone to nothing but droning sound
      longer nights made bright
      only to those few chose to see the curvy
      path overgrown and forged by foliage;
      dangerous and beautiful
      Made safe only by my warm candle light

      Enternities gone by without a single soul
      silend days, cold nights, all blurred into one,
      the constant, stangnant sight of-
      oh!
      My flame burns, the night turned warm once more.
       
      • x 1
    5. "Jack be nimble, Jack be quick"
      Is what the poet said
      But jumping over that candle stick
      Is how I lost my head

      Now I sit and watch the daily crowd
      Upon this makeshift throne
      Being immobile and much too proud
      Is more horrible than I have ever known

      So while my mobility was taken
      The split in my forehead grew an eye
      I can clearly see the future fates
      Of who will live and who will die
      And it leaves my brain quite shaken
       
      • x 4
    6. Angel's feathers whisper deep in the night,
      Only a child's innocence can see its blinding light.
      Fear feeds its empty soul full all winter time.
      Tears of pain run down the middle of its many eyes,
      While Life shrieks at its presence, for it is not a familiar sight.
      Beautiful, cold, static, and lifeless,
      A statue made of love through art.
      A song silent to those who cannot see the blinding light,
      Only those who are innocent can hear its whispers deep at night.
      Death feeds its famished soul all winter long.
      Cries of anger barely escaping from its tighten mouth
      While life shrieks in pain at its presence,
      For it is not friend nor foe.
       
    7. When my eyes beheld that woman, I knew she was divine.
      At once I knew I had to make that angel become mine!
      But when I spoke to her, she gave a cruel smile;
      How could such an angel, speak with so much bile?

      So her lips I glued shut, that she may never speak;
      Her tears with makeup ran, they looked so much like ink.
      The struggle scarred her skin, her body now looked bleak,
      But with a simple blade, that can be fixed I think!

      "You need not be scared, smile for me please!
      For you are still an angel, but an angel just for me."
      When her head I severed, her third eye opened wide.
      She cried so much smoke; twas a fire in her mind.

      But I cannot see her burning, for my love is far too bright!
       
      #7 Relew, Aug 25, 2017
      Last edited by a moderator: Aug 26, 2017
      • x 2
    8. Like the corners of my soul
      Darkness eclipsed the room
      Cavernous, empty, concealed
      It could have become my tomb

      In the shade of my chamber
      The third eye detected all
      It is watching as I rise up
      It saw my bitter fall

      Wings beat, dusting my domain
      Something glistens below
      What is it, you inquire?
      Optimistic beam of hope

      The best is yet to come
       
      • x 2
    9. Come to my forest, child
      Come to where I'm waiting, waiting
      Come to my forest, child
      And I will take you home

      Light the candle, child
      You can stop roaming, roaming
      Light the candle, child
      And you can rest your bones

      Sleep deeply, child
      Never ever waking, waking
      Sleep most deeply
      My dear child
      And feed my hungry soul
       
      • x 3
    10. Tell me what ails you my dear!
      Better yet, tell The Virgin who lives in the woods.
      Those who have seen her say she has a third eye—
      Good for seeing into your troubled soul.
      With wings upon her brow,
      She flutters and flies into realms beyond our own.
      Visit her in the evening when the world is dim!
      She will light a candle just for you.
      She will hold it as she navigates through the brambles of your troubled mind.
      And maybe, just maybe,
      She will ignite a fire in your thoughts,
      Clearing away the diseased trees which plague you,
      Making room for new growth.
       
      • x 1
    11. the music played

      the candles burned

      (the eyes should be avoided.)

      the memories; I struggle to recall:

      escape,​

      disjointed.

      A light

      a face

      a trembling note

      (of Israfeli's lyre?)

      the white coat asked

      sotto voce

      "Do you recall the fire?"
       
      • x 1
    12. i want you to tie me up in bondage baby.

      i want you to pull my hair to tear it out
      and mount my head upon your stick.
      illuminate my virgin dark
      make me beg to take your spark.

      i want you to drip hot wax upon my ash
      and reveal to me some godly truths.
      with your fingers-tips open my third eye
      make me an oracle as they pry.

      tongue my lips to taste them black with bruises,
      make my heart race, but let me come in last.

      though our love factory is burning clouds of smoke,
      the silver lining for me is all in the coke.
       
    13. Smoke speaks senselessly without a blaze
      Maddened by dulled and dusty desires

      Blinded by the burden of sight handed away
      To he who hardly loved but flesh

      Now alone save a sadistic psyche
      Medusa's mind makes appalling motions

      Which cold cuts your cortex the least
      Solitude or silence?

      Under the moonlight, a choice is made
      sparked by the fury of resentment and regret

      hear her wailing as the wick devours all that melts
      until lastly even melancholia is lulled to sleep

      Smoke chose silence; blind sorrow rendered voiceless
       
    14. My thoughts are churning

      My spirit yearning

      I strive to see what’s ahead


      What life I’ll live

      In this sudden chill

      Once your warmth has melted away


      The passion you had

      And the tears you shed

      It was all too much to bear


      I wished you were dead

      But now I dread

      Your burden will always remain

      Though I’m finally flying again
       
      • x 1
    15. Two eyes that weep
      A third a seeks
      What cannot be seen by day

      By candlelight
      We will take flight
      For only I can lead the way

      The cold of snow in winter
      Will never make me wither

      For it only make make me brighter
      When I lift you even higher

      You can't hide in my sight
      By the pale moonlight
      Come with me and we'll fly together
       
    16. What the hell is that
      I don't even know
      Some kind of eye
      Must mean something deep
      Monotone art piece
      I think its weird
      Something something something
      Too much hunger inside
      Chips and salsa sounds good
      Already bought a chicken
      My sadness is real
      And thirst also
      Bacon
       
      • x 9
    17. Lost amid the centuries,
      pale eye flickering in the dark;
      who remembers those who have gone before?

      Who survives that may see those who remain?

      Silent sentinels,
      you precious few that weep in the dying light,
      what may we who seek your wisdom
      hope to find amid your treasured memories?

      The flight of dreams, or wisps of failures?

      Surely, there is little that remains unknown to you,
      and yet,
      with a single glance within that pale, flickering eye,
      all may be remembered and lost to the ages.
       
    18. What an amazing sculpt! It makes me thing of escape, ghosts and invisible things that can be seen when shifting perspective.

      I look at you and I want to fly
      Away from your face
      I'd rather die,
      Than sit next to you
      Why oh why
      Are you still here
      Grandma?

      I remember when your cane
      'suddenly slipped'
      And I fell down the stairs
      You spiteful old bag,
      you murderous dead hag
      And now in spirit you're still here!
       
      • x 1
    19. The Valkyrie calls,
      The Valkyrie calls.
      Upon the battlefield the final head falls.

      Though you lie on the ground the battle is won,
      Fear not brave warrior your work here is done.

      And lament not for those you leave far behind,
      For their battle continues; they've not earned the right.

      So let not your head cast down in shame,
      Nor your knees touch the ground as they take you away.
      The light of your bravery brightly will shine,
      Guiding those souls home when comes their time.

      For there is no greater honor O'maiden of shields,
      Than the honor of death upon the battlefield.
       
      • x 1
    20. Silent shines the goddess eye
      Which once saw hope for men
      Last idol from an Age gone by
      Lost faith in mortals then

      Primeval days bore souls of Gold
      Unmarred by sins and scars
      But evil spread as hearts grew cold
      And drove her to the stars

      Before the altar Iron-grey
      Dull ash where once was light
      With hope as frail as smoke we prey
      That Justice end our plight

      And lament Astraea’s flight
       
      • x 2
    21. Awaken, Ajna!,
      For your silence resonates louder than any drum.
      Tear free the dam, allow your thick waxy tears to flow just once,
      Like the river to the sea.

      Ridged face of dappled grey stone,
      Your soft flesh has already hardened,
      A statue where you stand.

      Spread your wings wide, Oh Fallen One.
      Take flight and soar sky-high.
      Do not fear the supernova:
      For every star who once lived, must die.

      Break away to face oblivion.
      Millions of pieces scattered to garnish the land,
      Where back to the Earth you must return, a brand new woman or man.

       
      • x 1
    22. Pain

      The cold

      To be blind

      Open to the world


      I see your deepest pain

      I feel the coldness within you

      I am the blindness that you hide

      No longer open to the world, but closed


      The pain is crushing like the weight that binds

      The cold spreads like wings from your mind to mine

      Blind, you hide behind your third eye to wait for clarity

      Now open to the world, moments before, a breath taken in fear


      Wake from this nightmare and open your eyes, no pain, no fear, breathe
       
    23. There was a man
      Who wanted to enter
      A contest that showed off his rhymes
      Unfortunately
      As the man could see
      He was running short on time
      So he took off his head
      And to it he said
      "We need to write these lines"
      While his body was at work
      His third eye was a perk
      His heat sat in concentration
      I guess you could say all he needed to do was use his head and a little cooperation
       
      • x 8
    24. Luck

      Chance Karma

      Blessing Breaking Lighting

      Fortune Smiles and Brings Triumph

      Winning Gaining Fulfilling

      Success Pride

      Victory

      Enthrall Entrance

      Influencing Dominating Killing

      The Wheel Turns and Power Shifts

      Deteriorating Decaying Failing

      Consequence Destiny

      Fate ​
       
    25. I was born from the earth, crowned in vines and flowers
      I was goddess, virgin, lost child
      I was mother and judge
      I showed them how to till the soil, plant the seed
      I stood before them in judgement, separating wheat from chaff
      I gave them my torch to light their way when they wandered alone
      And roots to ground them
      I was honoured with offerings of seeds
      And flesh in earthen pots
      I saw all with my third eye
      I saw their births, their unions, their deaths
      I see them still
      Though they no longer see me
       
      • x 1
    26. "Goddess of Virgins,"
      and yet
      "Mother to All,"
      you abandoned your title,
      to fulfill Passion's call.


      But his Eye did wander,
      and though you stood tall,
      without love's breezes,
      your wings let you fall.

      An extinguished soul,
      under a mourning shawl,
      your soul turned to ash...,
      "I thought he loved me."

      He threw you out like a doll.
       
    27. Open your eyes
      Banish the shadows
      A spark of magic
      A breath of light

      You come

      Trading tears for the flame
      Casting aside the waters
      Rising instead from ash
      On wings to carry you heavenward

      All seeing
      The breath of a spell
      Banish the darkness
      And open your eyes​
       
    28. This one true eye:
      Entry beyond consciousness
      Into the constellation of falling stars
      That whisper of what lies within

      This one true eye:
      Key to the limits of perception
      That frees the soul to feast on the wisdom
      Of my own intuition

      This one true eye:
      Lifts the veil like a lover's hand
      Revealing the indigo blue clarity
      Of the spirit guide's prophecy
      Transcendence is mine

       
    29. A light to hold
      When all grows cold
      And the world is dark.

      This light you've spied
      Will be your guide
      Behold my burning spark.

      Grasp me tight
      And all will be right
      I'll protect you through and through.

      To chase away
      And keep the dark at bay
      The only hope you ever knew.

      Because after all, what else would a good friend do?
       
    30. Here comes a candle to light you to bed,
      Here comes a chopper to chop off your head,

      Here the Pale Rider to make your skin white,
      And here the Sibyl to give you new sight,

      Better than two, one eye will see,
      The wings of your mind will fly feverishly,

      But corporeal limbs are severed for this,
      No hands shall you take, no lips shall you kiss,

      Seized from the earth up into the sky,
      You wanted the fire but now you will cry:

      "Is this what I sought to be?
      What, my hunger, have you made of me?

      I only wanted to be free!"​



      I'm just competing for fun! I'm not competing for the prize (as interesting as it is!), but I couldn't resist continuing after I thought of the first two lines (which are from "Oranges and Lemons," a traditional English nursery rhyme).
       
      • x 3
      • Cake Cake x 2
    31. As night dawns upon thee,
      my eyes see everything.
      Your soft touch among the brush,
      coming closer to me.
      My ears start to ring
      and my feet start to rush.

      But the cold night beckons me,
      as I try to fly away
      with these fragile wings.
      But my eyes cease to see,
      as I am led astray.
      As a frail voice sings,
      I melt into the darkness.
       
    32. Save me, you begged with body unmarked
      Fearing the decline of age and the lurk of disease
      The price of living too great for you
      So I gave you these things:

      Wings to give your spirit flight
      But no hands to reach out or be held.
      No soft flesh to sag or bones to break
      But no way to free words behind stony lips.

      A pedestal to keep you safe
      And unable to reach those the flame lets you see.
      Fire paints sooty art round eyes you cannot close
      But ashen tears slide down your cheeks.

      O Virgo, unspoiled one, was this not what you wanted?
       
      • x 1
    33. Will-o'-the-wisp

      Little one lost in the woods,
      I watch your wandering ways.
      Bloodied feet and dimming eyes.

      Come near, come closer.
      Hush your cries and brush your tears.

      Little one so far from home,
      I fly above on feathered bones.
      Drifting smoke and floating sparks.

      Come near, come closer.
      Hush your cries and brush your tears.

      Little one sleep deep and long,
      I keep and hide my treasured one.
      Stilling feet and sealing eyes.
       
    34. The mist that settles on my overcoat,
      like diamonds glistening in the distant streetlamp,
      snuffed the guttering candle
      that danced shadows in the deep relief carving
      of your name.
      Just letters. Like so many others before them, next to them,
      Like so many that will come after
      But these...these are yours
      And while they brand you, they are inadequate to capture you,
      And without the flame, even those letters are lost.
      There is nothing here for me.
      I take the memories and leave the rock and the rain
      And the other gravestones will stand silent sentinels.
       
      • x 1
    35. I stand alone with the past in my eye
      My thoughts are a wind
      - blow to set the fire
      get birth to the new light and new life

      Beauty of the present hurts so much
      that I barely stay still
      I am not for the move
      I just watch everything

      The future is coming with every breath
      turns the world once the dark once the bright
      my spell never fails
      silence covered with quicksilver

      Just light the candle and come with me
       
    36. what is providence but a myth and a noose around the neck
      but for you, my dearest, beloved, I will craft the most beautiful lie

      I'll walk the path before you
      and when you lay to rest for final time
      I'll be the light that guides your steps in this never-ending hell

      for you I'll change my shape, defile my body
      discarding every unnecessary part
      My broken arms, my feet that have ceased moving forward
      all to achieve the Perfect form to lead you
      a candlelight in this world saturated in regret and uncertainty

      So close but never enough to feel your warmth
      despite everything we'll carry on this beaten path because for me there is only you
      my lace winged moth chained to the glow of false hope
       
      • x 1
    37. Congratulations to @phanuel for winning this year's poetry contest! :D

      There were many great entries and we really enjoyed reading them. :aheartbea

      Phanuel, please post in Ask the Moderators to claim your prize.
       
      • x 2
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